Simon's Tutorial Friday 11th April

After my complete export fail for my official Time Art review, I organised a tutorial with Simon to discuss my work. I made the improvements he suggested to the matte painting side of things and did a lot of work on that during the week to make sure I had enough time to do anything else we discussed in this coming tutorial. This is what I showed Simon:

The main comments he made and that we discussed were as follows:

1. The Matte Painting is too murky, the audience should see the bottom.
2. The images overlapping each other is quite disorganised and should perhaps be more uniform.
3. There could be something underneath the images.
4. The matte painting could interact with the images in some way.
5. There needs to be a loop.
6. Maybe there could be a sense of change in the matte painting itself.
7. Include more footage that highlights desire with building large structures.

I agreed with the matte painting being too murky, and on my computer it looked a lot brighter than it would on some others. I also liked the sound of creating a transition in the matte painting, and new of a way instantly to do that. 

The only thing I was really unsure about on that list was putting something underneath the images. Although I suggested it, I feel like it might be too much for the audience to take in, and may be quite distracting.